HAlf LIFE
One day there was a tree whose one side was living the other side wasdead.
There were different kinds of animals on each side.
The dead side could not cross to the living side.
The dead side could not regrow at all.
The living animals on the dead side of the tree could not cross to the living side.
There was an eagle on the dead side and a deer on the living side.
The two animals were completely different from each other.
They were separated when there where an earthquake.
The two animals were together with other animals but they all
fled when the earthquake occurred.
The earthquake caused an invisible barrier that separated
the living from the dead.
They found a way to cross but it ended up killing them.
As soon as they both died the world was great once again
and life was restored.
Trees were growing again and animals started living once
again and the
world was hole once again not in two pieces.
There were different kinds of animals on each side.
The dead side could not cross to the living side.
The dead side could not regrow at all.
The living animals on the dead side of the tree could not cross to the living side.
There was an eagle on the dead side and a deer on the living side.
The two animals were completely different from each other.
They were separated when there where an earthquake.
The two animals were together with other animals but they all
fled when the earthquake occurred.
The earthquake caused an invisible barrier that separated
the living from the dead.
They found a way to cross but it ended up killing them.
As soon as they both died the world was great once again
and life was restored.
Trees were growing again and animals started living once
again and the
world was hole once again not in two pieces.
The dead side is a symbol of how people are destroying the
world bit by bit.
The living side is a symbol of the things that is not a abused yet.
world bit by bit.
The living side is a symbol of the things that is not a abused yet.
There needs to be a balance between the living and the dead.
THE END
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