Wednesday, October 31, 2018

The flying SUPER CHILD.

The flying SUPER   CHILD.


There was a child that had the power of flight.
He did not know he had superpowers and that he got the power from his mom.
His mom was a superhero. She saved many people's lives.
She was known as a glorious hero.
There was a day that the mom made a mistake and she died.
Nobody thought that she would die that day.
It was a very sad day for the son and the dad.


10 YEARS later the dad died.
The dad died a tragic death.
The dad was coming home to his son.
The next moment there was a big bang, bang, bang, as the shots rang!!!!!
The father was murdered. The dad's death made the son said.
The son went into the mom's’ room and found what he thought was a lolly.
He did not know that it was not JUST a lolly but it had the mom s’ superpower in the lolly. He kept the lolly as a remembrance of his parents.


10 YEARS later the son was all grown up already.
He was getting out the lolly to eat it. When he finished eating the lolly
the next day he could fly and he also had laser eyes and super strength.
He was the new hero. He saved a lot of people in his life.
He fought a lot of crime and caught a lot of bad people.
He looked after his neighborhood. He had a great 60 years on earth.
He ended up dying of old age.

                                                  THE END

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