Honey, I shrunk the kids
One Day there was a dad and he had three children named
Peet, Jack, and Jim. They were 10, 11 and 9 years old.
They were extremely naughty. One day the dad had enough of his naughty little children and he shrunk them. The dad was incredibly smart and he
designed a machine that could shrink things. After the boys got shrunk
they had a hard life because they had to run away from all the birds, rats,
cars and even ants. They had to look for their own food.
There was nobody to cook for them and look after them.
They had to do it all by themselves. Jack was smart.
Jim was lazy. Peet was slow.
They got into some danger when a rock came down on them to crush them and they had to run away. Jack, Jim and
Peet was scared that they might get crushed if they did not run.
Peet got crushed, Jim got crushed when he saw Peet die and he was sad. Jack got away safely but he was very sad.
He had to face the giant cliff in front of him.
There was nowhere to run except towards the cliff.
He could jump over the cliff or he could jump on the rolling rock orang onto the cliff side. There are many ways to go offer buthere is not a noth time. A Lot of the solution he had in mind ends in death. So if he jumps he might not make the
whole jump.
If he jumps on the rock he might get crushed and if he holds on to the cliff he might die or live. So will he do it or give up?
He decided to hold on to the edge. He was amazed that he is still alive.
He still had to get back home and get big again. He tried to get back home before dark but he was so tiny so he would struggle. It got dark and he was still not home. He decided to go on and not get warm and find a shelter.
He ends up cold and alone and he was struggling. He ends up dying.
Peet, Jack, and Jim. They were 10, 11 and 9 years old.
They were extremely naughty. One day the dad had enough of his naughty little children and he shrunk them. The dad was incredibly smart and he
designed a machine that could shrink things. After the boys got shrunk
they had a hard life because they had to run away from all the birds, rats,
cars and even ants. They had to look for their own food.
There was nobody to cook for them and look after them.
They had to do it all by themselves. Jack was smart.
Jim was lazy. Peet was slow.
They got into some danger when a rock came down on them to crush them and they had to run away. Jack, Jim and
Peet was scared that they might get crushed if they did not run.
Peet got crushed, Jim got crushed when he saw Peet die and he was sad. Jack got away safely but he was very sad.
He had to face the giant cliff in front of him.
There was nowhere to run except towards the cliff.
He could jump over the cliff or he could jump on the rolling rock orang onto the cliff side. There are many ways to go offer buthere is not a noth time. A Lot of the solution he had in mind ends in death. So if he jumps he might not make the
whole jump.
If he jumps on the rock he might get crushed and if he holds on to the cliff he might die or live. So will he do it or give up?
He decided to hold on to the edge. He was amazed that he is still alive.
He still had to get back home and get big again. He tried to get back home before dark but he was so tiny so he would struggle. It got dark and he was still not home. He decided to go on and not get warm and find a shelter.
He ends up cold and alone and he was struggling. He ends up dying.
Hello Matt,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Breeana, I am a Y7 from Kaingaroa school. Your story was good. I liked the interesting words that you used.